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:iconashkamoo:'s No Theme contest entry

Gdansk City
5th June

Minolta Dynax 5
Illford 100 Delta Professional

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:iconstevie73:
As your gallery shows, your sense of good photography is definetely present! Some brilliant pics there! As for this one I'll have to say it's absolutely...............beautiful! :-) The angle you've chosen to take the photo is very good. A very good perspective! You've combined the way the objects look with a very good, very acceptable change. By turning the object in the B/W-sepia direction you added a brilliant sense of history to the picture. If you would have done this with modern skyscrapers, you would have been dead wrong, but you didn't! The houses here are just right for the adjustments you made. And because of this change, the clouds look more dramatic aswell, which, in this case, really fits into the photo. The division between shade and sunshine form a nice, welcome contrast. Now if only the people would wear hats and neat dresses and some oldtimers would have been parked alongside the buildings, I'd swear you travelled back to the 18th century! :-) One smal remark: by holding the camera a bit lower to the ground, the stone lines would probably have had a more intense/drastic sense of perspective. But that could be a matter of taste! Thanks for sharing this beautifully worked out picture with us! :gadget:
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:iconhirmawan:
wow, beautiful city with amazing architectures..
btw, what are the white spots in the sky?
:icongarfildus:
thank you :aww:
white spots...
I think there had to be dust on the scanner while they were scanning the film, or they scratched it :/
I'll check the negative later

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The trouble with having an open mind, of course, is that people will insist on coming along and trying to put things in it.
[T. Pratchett]

A Friend is the first one leaving in need

What's that? Not me! F*** that!! I'm a cat! =<^;^>=
:iconborysgodunoff:
oooo to zdjęcie miażdży, po prostu miażdży... doskonałe pod względem kadrowania, perspektywy, światła...
:icongarfildus:
dziękuję za miłe słowa
nie ukrywam że do końca nie wiedziałam co z tego zdjęcia wyjdzie
było bardzo silne słońce
ale jednak co Illford to Illford :)

--
The trouble with having an open mind, of course, is that people will insist on coming along and trying to put things in it.
[T. Pratchett]

A Friend is the first one leaving in need

What's that? Not me! F*** that!! I'm a cat! =<^;^>=

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